הביקורת הפנימית
The internal audit
A finding, a manager who wants the wording softened, and an auditor explaining what softening costs.
The opening
רָאִיתִי אֶת הַטְּיוּטָה.
I've seen the draft.
וְיֵשׁ הֶעָרוֹת?
And are there comments?
הַנִּיסּוּחַ חָרִיף מִדַּי.
The wording is too sharp.
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